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I sit.
Wanting nothing more then to just run away from here.
But I stay.
I thought there was something totally different,
But I blew it,
And now there can never be me and you.
I need your warm touch that was always tentatively close to me,
Even though I had never known it was there.
I need to hear your loving voice,
Even though it had always sounded rude to my ears.
I need to feel that fur that was always so close to mine,
But I would shrink away thinking it was a trick,
Not knowing what could have been in store for me.
I now wonder why I shrank away from that one lick.
I had thought it was because you hate me,
But now I realize that I was too mouse-brained to see it before.
I hadn’t realized the love I felt for you.
That was always why I picked on you.
But now it is all too late for any of that.
You must hate me now,
For saying the things I said to you.
But please I want you to come back.
I finally realized where my heart belonged,
And it is in your paws.
I know there is that saying,
“Forgive and Forget”.
You can forget about everything that happened,
But could you please forgive me for the wrong I did to you??
I know it mind sound mouse-brained,
But I really do love you.
©2009-2010 ~wolfcloudfantasy
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This is a poem I wrote for one of my roleplaying cats, Flareshadow.
She was going through a tough time in her life, not knowing who to turn to for support. When something was taken from her, she realized her true feelings and went out to set things right. This is a poem marking this special event.

As you can tell, this is told in the form of one cat to another. Some of the sayings, such as "mouse-brain", are from the Warriors book series.

Warrior (C) Erin Hunter
Flareshadow (C) Me
Poem (C)

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:icontimebleeder:
Ah, I remember now. Wolfy used to tell me about how Wolfspirit loved Honeycloud(I think) and then when she picked the other tom over him he was sad and then had a weird love/hate relationship with Flare.

'Ello *Waves* How are you? Hmmm, Thinking of Wolfspirit makes me wanna do a reborn it of him *sigh*

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Breaking me is harder than it seems
:iconwolfcloudfantasy:
I am pretty good, just tired from volleyball right now.
I'm doing a reborn of Hawkfeather. He was my first cat of the clan, starting out as the young deputy. Im miss him. :cries:

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:icontimebleeder:
Ahh, yea I think I already know who his parents are going to be.
As hard as it's going to be I think I'm going to have to kill Hiddenheart or Fernsplash to make Mistkit *sniffles*

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:icontimebleeder:
Who is the other cat she is talking about?

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:iconwolfcloudfantasy:
She is talking about Wolfspirit. Flareshadow wasn't exactly fond of him at the start.

And hey Dragon! *huggles*
Or *cough cough* Raven. :)

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Immortal Hybrid: Jayden||Mariah
:iconchristianonfire7:
Nice poem Flare!

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You know that feeling where everything feels right? Where you don't have to worry about tomorrow or yesterday, where you feel safe and know you're doing the best you can? There's a word for that, it's called love. L-O-V-E.

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